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I really enjoyed it. Interesting use of the present tense, for one thing. You did a really good job with the characters, keeping them realistically in tune with the way they were portrayed on the show. Azula's obsession with "winning" and delusion that she can still reclaim her throne were a masterful touch- it truly feels like she's suffering from a mental disorder.
Also, the descriptions were really sexy.
The present tense thing was a lot of extra effort - and I'm still not sure why I chose to do it. I'd like to think it's to mimic the immediacy of the TV show format... or something...